Bitter Sweet Dreams

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by The Elemental Dragon (queen of dragons) on Thursday, 08-Mar-2007 21:42:29

This is strange.

Bitter Sweet Dreams
By
Ashley Gorzelany

The rain is falling,
Falling like my soul shatters,
As the small drops hit the cold ground,
The tears start to fall,

Is this a waking nightmare,
When will this end,
I live for pain,
I die by pain,
It's a bitter sweet dream.

Pain is my comfort,
Stabbing, slashing unrelenting agony,
My life blood spills before my eyes,
Death is becoming,

Is this a waking nightmare,
When will this end,
I live for pain,
I die by pain,
This is a bitter sweet dream,

The screams are haunting,
The pain is relentless,
Bodies are broken,
Except for me,

Is this a waking nightmare,
When will this end,
I live for pain,
I die by pain,
I'm living a bitter sweet dream,

Post 2 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Saturday, 10-Mar-2007 0:58:34

Bitter sweet is the nightmare upon awakening,
that to feel...really feel...is in the pain
no pain..no feeling..
no feeling..feeling only nightmare

Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Wednesday, 14-Mar-2007 11:16:09

Stunning you capture emotion so well.
I love it!

Post 4 by dream lady (move over school!) on Wednesday, 21-Mar-2007 5:28:43

Beautiful. Captures humanity and its perpetual condition. Awesome.